Love the economy and the word/rhyme play and the meaning. I instantly thought of alternative last line.. sole bearing witness... just for wordplay, of course, but really yours is the better and more poetic :-)
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Love the economy and the word/rhyme play and the meaning. I instantly thought of alternative last line.. sole bearing witness... just for wordplay, of course, but really yours is the better and more poetic :-)
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