Whispers, ethereal visitations, your sojourn a frolic of frivolities. Muse for a moment on your beneficence, your abilities... Under some daylight tree out there you too may turn your hand to a poem
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Perhaps a comma after "ethereal" may be in order? It's up to you. I admit, I'm not 100% sure of the message of this poem, but how I percieved it was with this overall meaning: "When inspired, write". Am I even close? =)
Thanks for your suggestion. I have added some punctuation so it reads better. The poem is for people that I don't know who visit my site, and may not write poetry themselves. I like your site, thanks for visiting mine :)
4 comments:
Perhaps a comma after "ethereal" may be in order? It's up to you. I admit, I'm not 100% sure of the message of this poem, but how I percieved it was with this overall meaning: "When inspired, write". Am I even close? =)
Thanks for your suggestion. I have added some punctuation so it reads better. The poem is for people that I don't know who visit my site, and may not write poetry themselves. I like your site, thanks for visiting mine :)
ah, ok! Thanks for explaining it, and thanks for the compliment.
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